The Paragraph That Refuses to Work Is Usually in the Wrong Place
I once spent three days staring at a single, stubborn page in a memoir manuscript, nursing a lukewarm latte and wondering if I’d finally lost my edge. The client was paying a premium day rate, but no amount of money makes a broken sentence feel any less like a personal insult. You’ve likely been there: you’re circling the same three ideas, polishing the adjectives until they shine with a fake, hollow light, yet you still haven’t figured out how to fix a paragraph that will not work. Most writing gurus will tell you to “find your muse” or “wait for…