Why Your Second Draft Reads Worse Than Your First
I remember sitting in a cramped, windowless office in Bloomsbury twenty years ago, staring at a manuscript that had gone from a shimmering, intuitive first draft to a clunky, self-conscious disaster by the second pass. The author was convinced they had lost their “magic,” but as I looked at the red ink blooming across the pages, I knew better. The truth is that most writing gurus will tell you that revision is a spiritual journey of refinement, but that’s a lie designed to sell expensive workshops. In reality, the reason why the second draft is often worse isn’t a lack…