Telling Someone Their Manuscript Needs a Rewrite
I remember sitting in a windowless office in Bloomsbury back in 2004, staring at a manuscript that felt less like a book and more like a pile of unorganized laundry. My mentor leaned over, sipped a lukewarm tea, and whispered, “Don’t try to save it; just decide if it’s worth the invoice.” That was the day I learned the hard way that there is a massive difference between a ‘difficult edit’ and a total structural collapse. Most writing gurus will tell you to dig deeper and find the soul of the story, but they aren’t the ones paying your day…