One Specific Example Beats Three Vague Ones
I spent three hours last Tuesday staring at a manuscript for a mid-list business author that was essentially a graveyard of clichés. Every time the writer tried to make a point, they leaned on a generic, “imagine a scenario” anecdote that had all the teeth of a gummy vitamin. It’s a common trap: people think they’re being illustrative, but they’re actually just padding the word count to meet a deadline they haven’t properly budgeted for. They don’t realize that knowing how to use examples well isn’t about adding more bulk to the page; it’s about knowing when a specific, sharp…