Transitions Are Where Arguments Are Won
I spent three hours last Tuesday staring at a manuscript that had “brilliant” ideas, but they were scattered like loose change on a sidewalk. The author had used every “furthermore,” “moreover,” and “in addition” in the English language, yet the logic still felt like a series of disconnected jumps. People treat transitions like decorative lace—something you stitch onto a sentence to make it look pretty—but that’s a fundamental misunderstanding of how transitions carry an argument. If your logical connective tissue is weak, no amount of sophisticated vocabulary will stop an editor from marking your work as incoherent. I’m not here…